I was out on my fancy yacht, out at sea when a gigantic shadow appeared. It swam under the five tonne boat then it started circling the boat. I was getting scared then the shadow disappeared. Where is it? I said to my self. It was quiet, too quiet. Then suddenly the giant fish flew up into the air and then all I could hear was crash, crush, crumble, smash, snap, slosh, bang, boom, bash,. I had no choice but to jump overboard.
2 comments:
Cool nice work.
From Brydon
Very discriptive words Justin and i like the way you made your picture tie in with your story
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